SUICIDAL WOMAN

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Moonlight, shone upon her collied, weary heart. scarred by a life of many failures and dreams unfulfilled now she is a slave to her own thoughts, and undying feelings of indifference. the master of puppets pulls on her heartstrings. she lives on the dark side of the moon. yet her volcanic beauty is like a rare celestial body Galileo laid eyes on for the first time through a telescope back in 1610 and sketched into our history books for future human beings to gaze at and be marveled by. this is what her beauty is like. her eyes are like Egyptian Pools they show a reflection of her eternal soul which flows like the Nile; it could give life to entire civilizations. she doesn’t see the big picture, she doesn’t see her beauty, and these are both great tragedies. still, she lives on the dark side of the moon, the girl who was afraid to be…
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Daniels Avatar
December 20, 2025 at 3:12 AM
Powerfully sad, giving voice to the many girls who are still afraid to be. I liked how you’ve woven history and geography into the poem, Jorge. ThkU for sharing. Seasons blessings to you from South Africa.
Monge Avatar
December 21, 2025 at 1:41 AM
Thank you for the comment, I will check out some of your work. Much love from the United States would love to visit the great people of Africa one day.
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