Bradley Cox Poet Free verse

Suicidal Thought's

Am i awake
Am i dreaming
I wish someone could 
penetrate my mind
am i going to cope
with all these suicidal thought's
the evil's that are running 
though my sick twisted mind
Dr.s say my mind
is inaccesible
i take their pill's
with no effect
The doctor's inferior mind's
can't figure mine out
is my mind a maze of lie's
of suicidal thought's
i need to listen to 
the voice's in my head

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Karen Croft August 30, 2012 at 7:43 PM makes me wonder what other people are thinking. nice poem Bradley Cox August 30, 2012 at 9:23 PM i have alot of poems from dark side i try and do them all i hope no one thinks like this

Terry O'Leary August 21, 2012 at 4:25 PM Nice psychological imagery... Terry (Nice poem, too) Bradley Cox August 21, 2012 at 4:42 PM thank you

Laura Breidenthal August 21, 2012 at 4:18 PM Aye, another dark one. I love it. Always, Laura Bradley Cox August 21, 2012 at 4:42 PM thank you

Jennifer Spase August 11, 2012 at 6:22 AM i heard Dr. can treat but not cure. Only one miracle is finding God and wisdom. This world is never problem free and nobody is immune to the world's suffering. Bradley Cox August 11, 2012 at 8:58 AM Very true, thank you for reading and sharing with me