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Suicidal Papaya

I, pretty texture On the rising tree Roofing through the Puffs: A blue float O, insane leaves Dangling at the end of life's plank And yet their sad joy heaves Flowing through the breeze My, o my Did they suicide jump Winding on the bed Of sleeping lumps Dear Papa You better tell mama That lazy brother Wasn’t bothered to use a gun

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 6/8/2009 10:04:00 AM
Awesome Use Of Words With "Suicide Jump" Talking About How They Fall. Good Job. Peace. Jese
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Date: 6/5/2009 3:32:00 PM
What a clever take on the fall of the leaves making the "suicide jump." Very creative and a great image, Sajdah! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 6/5/2009 2:36:00 PM
Thank you for your comments on "Twilight"..and if you are writing these poems about things that have occurred in the lives of your friends and loved ones who are unable to express it...they have an amazing person to tell their stories in wonderful and unique poetry...Patricia
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