Suicidal Conscious

Ever wonder why people 
commit suicide?
Why they think it's better to 
leave than to face their fears of 
life?
Some think it's because of 
depression.
Others believe it's bullies.
Wanna know what I believe?
I believe that we don't want to 
live with ourselves anymore.
Our conscious is getting to us.
How is that bad?
Because our conscious controls 
us.
Our conscious kills us..
Are you alive right now? No.
How, you ask? Because you no 
longer have control over your 
body. Your fears now hold the 
key to your life. They 
determine what happens to 
you.
Are you afraid?
Do you think your conscious 
will turn on you?
I do..
Wanna know why? Because my 
conscious is already turning on 
me.
Oh, you thought I was alive?
You thought I was different?
Well, that's false.
I'm dying inside just like you..
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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April 29, 2013 at 10:09 AM
This is very deep Adrianna, hope you are well this morning. LInda
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