Sugar White Diamonds

Sugared diamonds 
sweeten a day by the sea;
Laying all about,
Pure white delicious beauty; 
Slowly lapped up by the waves.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Squyres Avatar
January 31, 2014 at 4:43 PM
I love the images that come to mind as well as the relaxed feel I get from reading your tanka. Excellent !! Congratulations on your win !!!
Jones Avatar
January 31, 2014 at 1:15 PM
Ahhh lovely...congratulations..
Mehta Avatar
January 27, 2014 at 10:58 PM
My heartfelt congratulation on the win, Melani
Dietrich Avatar
January 27, 2014 at 9:01 PM
This is so precious and pretty! Congrats for your win.
Roberts Avatar
January 27, 2014 at 8:53 PM
lovely tank, congrats on your third place win in the contest
Roberts Avatar
December 26, 2013 at 1:02 PM
psst, must have "white" in the title for contest, you can change it back after contest
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