Michael J. Falotico Poet Senryu

Sugar Sweetness

example for my " A Kiss Like Fruit" Contest                                            

                                                    
                                                      Warm juices drip slow..
                                                Lips now savor the sweetness..
                                                    Tongues wiggle in heat..

                                                       A ripe peach like kiss..
                                                       Sugar level rises fast..
                                                           A tasty kiss born..

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Katherine Stella October 23, 2011 at 7:54 AM OMG will have to jump in on this one as juicy as this is you did very well on this write Mike ok now where did I place my smokes lol thanks for sharing dear one keep up the great writing enjoyed also thanks for your kind comment on my halloween one

Poet Destroyer A October 21, 2011 at 3:41 PM I'm glad the soup is back up too... and by the way.. a sweet poem,, and the best of luck,..p.d.

Gwendolen Song October 15, 2011 at 7:54 AM YOwza yowza poem for your kissing contest. I see EVERYONE IS GONNA ENTER IT! I think I will do a colab write with my spouse for this one....we will have to practice first. lol. This is a fun break from all the autumn writes...altho I do love to write about this time of year. All the best!

Andrea Dietrich October 11, 2011 at 10:57 PM GREAT and tasty example, Michael. I really want to do this contest. I just hope I can hurry before it fills up!!!

Francine Roberts October 10, 2011 at 8:08 PM ooh la la , great example for the contest

Carolyn Devonshire October 10, 2011 at 7:26 PM Passionate! What a feeling it gives the reader. Now I need your address to send you the bill for my cold shower. I saw on your blog that Francine needs one too. Great example for your contest! Love, Carolyn

Linda-Marie Sweetheart October 10, 2011 at 11:52 AM wow I don't believe we are on the same poetic plane so deeply Michael luv.. peachy poem with lines of succulent delight.. oh am giving my entry away luv.. awesome example.. good luck with new contest... I cannot get upset over those GMEN..just when they had a chance to move up in the division.. bingo.. they lose.. but the boo birds .. crybabies lost in style and Reid is just about out the door...finally..with luv forever and always... xoxo.. but I am still upset over Yanks.

Dinda Minardi October 10, 2011 at 10:37 AM wow, this is a hot poem. I like how you describe it in a different way than before.. greatly written, dear michael :)

Nette Onclaud October 10, 2011 at 10:25 AM ahhhha!.. watch me slurp your contest, lol!!.. woohoo, michael! :) huggs

Kash Poet October 10, 2011 at 9:23 AM Very passionate write Michael.Thanks for the B'day wish.

Tracy Edwards October 10, 2011 at 8:30 AM Oooo very nice Michael xx

Sara Kendrick October 10, 2011 at 8:19 AM Show produce some tasty works..Enjoyed ..Sara