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When you and I are in the attic I may not be quite diplomatic, for you are my cruise-o-matic. So listen to me and pay attention, for when you lower your suspension my motor runs hot and lauds ascension. © Harry J Horsman 2020

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Date: 6/9/2020 5:20:00 AM
So cute! Cars distinctly produce a sensuality.
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Date: 3/27/2020 7:52:00 PM
ooh la la. So cute and spicy! (well, at least I was with Caycay on this one)
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Date: 3/23/2020 5:36:00 PM
So fun - full of whimsy - Harry! Good luck in the contest! One note - I thought you were always "diplomatic!"
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Date: 3/23/2020 12:17:00 PM
This is quite the rush - giddy and sweet -
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Date: 3/23/2020 11:35:00 AM
Hi Harry, loved the fun in this content, a wonderful write. I wish you all the best in the contest. It surely is a rattling rhyme. Have a wonderful Monday. Your friend always....Mike.
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Date: 3/23/2020 8:38:00 AM
Very funny!
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Date: 3/23/2020 8:02:00 AM
A fun read, Harry. All the best.
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Date: 3/23/2020 7:48:00 AM
She's got to be careful when lowering the suspension...Lots of fun in this one...
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Date: 3/23/2020 2:11:00 AM
Ha! I went in the gutter and really enjoyed the trip via your poem. I hope I was meant to go in the gutter! Looks like you may have been one of the last to enter the contest - I'm glad you did because if I took this correctly, it is quite clever, and if I didn't, oh well, that's just where I go sometimes! Poetry hugs ... CayCay
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/23/2020 8:38:00 AM
LOL, CayCay...me too! Hugs...Kim

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