Sugar Rush

When you and I are in the attic
I may not be quite diplomatic,
for you are my cruise-o-matic.
So listen to me and pay attention,
for when you lower your suspension
my motor runs hot and lauds ascension.

 © Harry J Horsman 2020
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Rodrigues Avatar
June 9, 2020 at 5:20 AM
So cute! Cars distinctly produce a sensuality.
Dietrich Avatar
March 27, 2020 at 7:52 PM
ooh la la. So cute and spicy! (well, at least I was with Caycay on this one)
Kauffman Avatar
March 23, 2020 at 5:36 PM
So fun - full of whimsy - Harry! Good luck in the contest! One note - I thought you were always "diplomatic!"
Faulkner Avatar
March 23, 2020 at 12:17 PM
This is quite the rush - giddy and sweet -
Raven Avatar
March 23, 2020 at 11:35 AM
Hi Harry, loved the fun in this content, a wonderful write. I wish you all the best in the contest. It surely is a rattling rhyme. Have a wonderful Monday. Your friend always....Mike.
Rodrigues Avatar
March 23, 2020 at 8:38 AM
Very funny!
Pandit Avatar
March 23, 2020 at 8:02 AM
A fun read, Harry. All the best.
Michael Avatar
March 23, 2020 at 7:48 AM
She's got to be careful when lowering the suspension...Lots of fun in this one...
Godwin Avatar
March 23, 2020 at 2:11 AM
Ha! I went in the gutter and really enjoyed the trip via your poem. I hope I was meant to go in the gutter! Looks like you may have been one of the last to enter the contest - I'm glad you did because if I took this correctly, it is quite clever, and if I didn't, oh well, that's just where I go sometimes! Poetry hugs ... CayCay
Rodrigues Avatar
March 23, 2020 at 8:38 AM
LOL, CayCay...me too! Hugs...Kim
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