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Sugar, G'Bye

you ...
were joy
gentle, sweet -
everything beautiful and mild
you devoured my
failings and frailties with soft silence
transformed them to
a tender, trembling music that
warmed my marrow ...
never a complaint or condition
naught but a gaze that
held love, untainted and undimmed,
acceptance, pure, and adoration
so assuredly undeserved ...
to be the silvery
stars in your vault -
the shimmer in your fiery eye -
was a blessing, unbound and precious ...
I was your WORLD,
and for as long as this fatuous
old fool can yet draw
breath, there is nothing
I am, have been, or could be ...
that compares. <3
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Ray Avatar
May 4, 2022 at 7:26 PM
Greg, i know this one as it echoes thru my every atom...every line was a shadow that burst into the light...the knowledge, you have captured the essence of love...
Watt Avatar
May 3, 2022 at 11:35 PM
Bard, you channel sorrow into bittersweet poetry better than anyone I know... your love for Sugar is heartwarming even as your grief is heart wrenching. "a tender, trembling music that warmed my marrow ..." is just so lovely. My sincere condolences for this empty place in your heart ~ John
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May 3, 2022 at 4:38 PM
Hi Greg, such a Heartfelt poem. so sorry for your loss. A Perfect name for a beautiful Friend. God bless, Anthony
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