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Sugar Coated World

Living in a world of black and white 
 She stood with fire in her eyes 
 One of the few who understood 
 How life is covered in sugar coated lies

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akira artlyy

September 17, 2026 at 6:33 AM

I've really been enjoying your poem and the emotions and imagery were so vivid that i could easily picture them as beautiful illustration. I'm a commission-based manga/webtoon artist, and I'd love to help bring your story to life if you're ever interested. Feel free to reach out at gm@il : akiracomicart2@ or on inst@ akiraa_artly

Beata Agustin

April 27, 2024 at 5:52 AM

Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.

Poet Destroyer A

February 10, 2016 at 12:43 AM

HOPE TO SEE YOU POST AGAIN

Poet Destroyer A

February 10, 2016 at 12:42 AM

KALYNA, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry, LINDA

Skat A

August 23, 2015 at 11:09 PM

Kalyna, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT