Sugar Babies

Pigeon-toed and knock kneed
they meander around the ponds edge
an ungainly duo
mother and son
like an ancient fertility figure
found in the caves of Lascaux,France 
she tumble-waddles
pendulous breasts bobbing
the dough-like basket of her womb
long emptied with its navel of Earth
submerged in a mound of flesh..
onward she went circumventing
the piddle-pond.
The child not yet Twiddle-Dee'd
by total submersion into 
the toxic sweetness of a domino sugar 
existence still stood a chance..
yet the spectre of diabetes
loomed around the two
like the Ghost of Christmas future.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Smith-Johnsen Avatar
March 18, 2012 at 3:04 AM
Yep! A beautifully written message here, Debbie. A nation succumbed by sweetness...one way or another. Many health issues. Thank you for choosing my New Age Chemical Warfare about aspertine as a winner in your contest. They've got us in the food industry. What else? Just wondering.
Johnson Avatar
March 16, 2012 at 6:12 PM
yes in a word...message unheard... unhappiness does need...the taste of sweet...dispels at least ...unhappiness is blurred...deceit....
Alienmermaid Avatar
March 16, 2012 at 8:02 AM
WOW! Incredible imagery and the picture definitely makes the intent crystal clear.
Jones Avatar
March 15, 2012 at 4:51 PM
OMG! You had me gigglin' so hard as I went along and then those last three lines.... Nice to read you again .. namaste ~N
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