Sugar

For every guy 
there's a Sugar
a girl you could'nt marry
but wish you could've





(One of three Bessemer Women)
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Chircop Avatar
April 30, 2009 at 3:54 PM
this haiku is wonderful,im glad my fingertips got me here--charma
Gass Avatar
February 7, 2009 at 6:21 AM
It's like that for girls too, sometimes. Great little write here, John. Like I have said before, they must all be/have been really something special. So happy to hear that these women helped you through some rough spots. Good series and dedications to your friends! Love, Robin
Duhart Avatar
February 2, 2009 at 6:48 AM
Ok this was funny..I was looking for natural sugar..Cute..
Winter Avatar
January 31, 2009 at 10:23 AM
Well Mr. Loving, since I'm not a guy I don't know. : ) But if you say so. A most clever haiku. Love, Shar
Degenhardt Avatar
January 30, 2009 at 9:56 AM
You know, deep inside I know this to be true. A thought so clearly and well expressed. Michael
Higgins Avatar
January 30, 2009 at 9:48 AM
Yep!
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