Sugar

For every guy there's a Sugar a girl you could'nt marry but wish you could've (One of three Bessemer Women)

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Charmaine Chircop

Date: 4/30/2009 3:54:00 PM

this haiku is wonderful,im glad my fingertips got me here--charma

Robin L. Gass

Date: 2/7/2009 6:21:00 AM

It's like that for girls too, sometimes. Great little write here, John. Like I have said before, they must all be/have been really something special. So happy to hear that these women helped you through some rough spots. Good series and dedications to your friends! Love, Robin

Mary Duhart

Date: 2/2/2009 6:48:00 AM

Ok this was funny..I was looking for natural sugar..Cute..

Sharon Winter

Date: 1/31/2009 10:23:00 AM

Well Mr. Loving, since I'm not a guy I don't know. : ) But if you say so. A most clever haiku. Love, Shar

Michael Degenhardt

Date: 1/30/2009 9:56:00 AM

You know, deep inside I know this to be true. A thought so clearly and well expressed. Michael

Christopher Higgins

Date: 1/30/2009 9:48:00 AM

Yep!