Suffused

I am the river’s rush Confused in mad scramble, until your open sea’s calm vastness welcomes me - You suffuse me with warmth.
Kim Patrice Nunez 12 July 2015 Mystique Contest - #1 connection with supreme source Sponsor: Nette Onclaud

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Date: 7/27/2015 11:56:00 PM
Awesome pen Kim! Superb write n great win ! Big congrats!
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Date: 7/26/2015 12:06:00 PM
This is so beautiful! I love it so much. You're very talented poet, too. I can see this superb poem won. My Huge Congrats and thank you so much for sharing! Thank you so much as well for your precious time to read mine, your very lovely comments and your warm congrats. So, you're a Filipino? Wow! I'm so happy to meet another very talented and sweet Pinoy poet here. San sa atin? Nice to meet you dear KIm. Big Hugs! I'll come back to read more from you if you don't mind. TYSM. love lots Leonora
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Date: 7/25/2015 6:43:00 PM
very good pen Kim hugs
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Date: 7/25/2015 5:03:00 PM
Kim your poem is beautiful, I love the first line! Congrats ~lee
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Date: 7/25/2015 5:00:00 PM
Dropping back with my congrats Kim:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 7/25/2015 4:31:00 PM
So pleased to be back with deserved congratulations, Kim! Well done! Hugs // paul
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Date: 7/25/2015 3:13:00 PM
Sweet win Kim.... SK
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Date: 7/25/2015 1:46:00 PM
This poem is so lovely Kim. I connected with the divine picture too. Congrats on your wonderful win my friend! Very deserving.
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Date: 7/25/2015 10:56:00 AM
you did a fantastic job with yours. BIG congrats.
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Date: 7/25/2015 9:54:00 AM
Kim, your talent shines above all!!! congratulations !!! :O))
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Date: 7/16/2015 1:38:00 AM
this is phenomenal, dear Kim! too many sensations rushed, left me scrambling, then calm and warmth. ahh the beauty in your words...
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Date: 7/13/2015 8:28:00 AM
Lol!!!!! What an excellent piece, lovely as always......A.M.
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Date: 7/13/2015 3:35:00 AM
Love's current must reach the horizon of it's sanctuary...I like the vigor of your heart Kim...J.A.B.
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Date: 7/12/2015 5:20:00 PM
oh I really love this , a river finding the warmth of the sea. So lovely!
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Date: 7/12/2015 4:47:00 PM
Delightful image and poem. Enjoyed the contrast between the mad rush of the opening lines and the calm at the end. #7 hugs // paul
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Date: 7/12/2015 1:04:00 PM
Hello Kim, Wonderful theme here and your choice of imagery is most excellent!! Your last verse brings it all together. Very Well-Done!! Best of Luck in Nette's contest!! Cheers, Gary
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Date: 7/12/2015 6:56:00 AM
such a lovely uplifting write Kim good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx7
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Date: 7/12/2015 6:56:00 AM
Oooh I like that, you're opening in is awesome I was hooked by your image. :)
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