Suffused

I am the river’s rush

Confused in mad scramble,

until your open sea’s

calm vastness welcomes me - 

You suffuse me with warmth.






Kim Patrice Nunez
12 July 2015
Mystique Contest - #1 connection with supreme source
Sponsor: Nette Onclaud

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Dr. Upma A. Sharma

July 27, 2015 at 11:56 PM

Awesome pen Kim! Superb write n great win ! Big congrats!

Len Gasun

July 26, 2015 at 12:06 PM

This is so beautiful! I love it so much. You're very talented poet, too. I can see this superb poem won. My Huge Congrats and thank you so much for sharing! Thank you so much as well for your precious time to read mine, your very lovely comments and your warm congrats. So, you're a Filipino? Wow! I'm so happy to meet another very talented and sweet Pinoy poet here. San sa atin? Nice to meet you dear KIm. Big Hugs! I'll come back to read more from you if you don't mind. TYSM. love lots Leonora

Shadow Hamilton

July 25, 2015 at 6:43 PM

very good pen Kim hugs

Lee Carter

July 25, 2015 at 5:03 PM

Kim your poem is beautiful, I love the first line! Congrats ~lee

Jan Allison

July 25, 2015 at 5:00 PM

Dropping back with my congrats Kim:-) hugs Jan xx

Paul Callus

July 25, 2015 at 4:31 PM

So pleased to be back with deserved congratulations, Kim! Well done! Hugs // paul

Skat A

July 25, 2015 at 3:13 PM

Sweet win Kim.... SK

Connie Marcum Wong

July 25, 2015 at 1:46 PM

This poem is so lovely Kim. I connected with the divine picture too. Congrats on your wonderful win my friend! Very deserving.

Andrea Dietrich

July 25, 2015 at 10:56 AM

you did a fantastic job with yours. BIG congrats.

Aiyah Torres

July 25, 2015 at 9:54 AM

Kim, your talent shines above all!!! congratulations !!! :O))

Hija De La Luna

July 16, 2015 at 1:38 AM

this is phenomenal, dear Kim! too many sensations rushed, left me scrambling, then calm and warmth. ahh the beauty in your words...

Afolabi Muideen

July 13, 2015 at 8:28 AM

Lol!!!!! What an excellent piece, lovely as always......A.M.

Justin Bordner

July 13, 2015 at 3:35 AM

Love's current must reach the horizon of it's sanctuary...I like the vigor of your heart Kim...J.A.B.

Andrea Dietrich

July 12, 2015 at 5:20 PM

oh I really love this , a river finding the warmth of the sea. So lovely!

Paul Callus

July 12, 2015 at 4:47 PM

Delightful image and poem. Enjoyed the contrast between the mad rush of the opening lines and the calm at the end. #7 hugs // paul

Gary Bateman

July 12, 2015 at 1:04 PM

Hello Kim, Wonderful theme here and your choice of imagery is most excellent!! Your last verse brings it all together. Very Well-Done!! Best of Luck in Nette's contest!! Cheers, Gary