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Suffocating Dust

Sombre and silent, nothing bares a shadow nor a trace of light. Slow and lifeless, every face is a blank surface with no emotion reflected upon it. Dim and eroded, every hand beholds dust of every spirit’s feelings and freedom; dust that is suffocating and as venomous as a snake’s bite. Souls drown within the dust but the memory of their presence remains as a scar upon our hearts.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 6/7/2011 1:08:00 PM
I really like your imagery and metaphors. It also follows really well. :) Great job!
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