Suffer

Everyday walking in an abyss

Living a lie

Smiling out of will power

Feeling empty

Gloom is your mindset

Doom is what you walk towards

Suffering is what it's called

Damned is what it truly is 

Only those who have been claimed can relate.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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October 8, 2026 at 10:15 AM
I've really been enjoying your poem and the emotions and imagery were so vivid that i could easily picture them as beautiful illustration. I'm a commission-based manga/webtoon artist,and I’d love to discuss the possibility of bringing this poem to life if you're ever interested. Feel free to reach out at gm@il : [email protected]
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May 28, 2016 at 1:15 PM
Kara, well penned. Enjoyed reading your thoughts and words today. *SKAT*
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