Sue the Beautiful Icicle

She was a beautiful icicle
Icicle Sue, my price pickle.
Icicle seen.
Icicle queen
A sharp icicle worth a nice nickle.


Written 1-8-2019        Contest:  Same Word Winter Limerick
                                Sponsor: Charles Messina
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Roper Avatar
January 18, 2019 at 10:52 PM
Caren, great ,very well written Limerick with great imagery. Congratulations on your win! Hugs Eve ~`*
Krutsinger Avatar
January 18, 2019 at 11:07 PM
Thank you Eve. I appreciate your stop by. Shouldn't we be asleep my friend?
Dietrich Avatar
January 17, 2019 at 7:27 PM
cute rhyme, Caren. a Belated Congrats here on your win. hope you got my email.
Krutsinger Avatar
January 17, 2019 at 9:37 PM
I did. I hope you got mine too. I will be checking again tonight.
Messina Avatar
January 15, 2019 at 7:32 AM
Hi Caren, I saw your comment to Alexis. Don't be silly, it's a wonderful limerick and well deserved of a win. I like how you did this as well. Congratulations on your WELL deserved win. :) Charlie
Krutsinger Avatar
January 15, 2019 at 10:02 AM
Thank you Charlie, but Silly is my middle name. Smile big now.
Y. Avatar
January 15, 2019 at 7:06 AM
Hi Caren, I really enjoyed how you wrote this. Great job! Congratulations on your 2nd place win:-) Alexis
Krutsinger Avatar
January 15, 2019 at 7:23 AM
Hilarious Alexis. I had no idea this thing would place. I am shocked really. I was confident until I saw that we had to use the SAME WORD in each line!
Bangalee Avatar
January 8, 2019 at 10:11 PM
really its awesome limerick
Krutsinger Avatar
January 9, 2019 at 1:06 AM
Thank you Mahtab. I appreciate it.
Gauthier Avatar
January 8, 2019 at 9:59 AM
Awesome limerick, Caren.
Krutsinger Avatar
January 8, 2019 at 11:29 AM
Thank you Line. Not my favorite, but it was difficult to use icicle in EVERY sentence!
Kiser Avatar
January 8, 2019 at 5:31 AM
That's a good one; good luck.
Krutsinger Avatar
January 8, 2019 at 8:00 AM
It is re-dunkulous to try to put the same word in every line; but I had to try it because if anyone understands being re-dunkulous, it is I.
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