Sudoku

Sudoku

My son was one
My one son is one no more
My daughter was two
And her sister was two too
At five they were so alive
All seven around the dinner table
At eight it was already late
And to bed they had to go
The one that was six
Got in a fix
Got in a bind
We lose and we find
We had four of one kind
The one that is one no more
Is with the Three
At heaven’s door
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Kiser Avatar
October 7, 2014 at 1:41 PM
Now, that is original! Beautifully done.
A  Avatar
October 7, 2014 at 12:49 PM
Daniel, i like how you played sudoku with a poem. Enjoy your day, Love ~SKAT~
Thajudeen Avatar
October 6, 2014 at 11:22 PM
Good.
Roper Avatar
October 6, 2014 at 10:58 PM
Sudoku is well wrote with heart break emotion . eve
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