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Suddenly Swans

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Softly swaying within their mist, Two swans appear falling in love… An exquisite alluring full of grace, A statuesque symmetrical sublime. With a mesmeric moon to entice the endless night, The surreal swans swim toward a flavourful floral… As they illuminate the twilight realm under rapture, A beckoning bewitching sweet surrender in a spell. They expose their beauty enchanting and enthralling, As the eye candy stretches beyond our spiritual sight... Two stunning swans engaging in the dance of divinity, Bearing witness to the most adorable angelic presence. April.09.2019 Suddenly Swans Poetry Sponsored by: Maureen McGreavy N/A for contest

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Caycay Jennings

Date: 4/13/2019 5:20:00 PM

Your lines are all loaded with a loveliness that beautifully stirred me. Quite a gem that sparks truly divine from the heat of mesmerizing writing, Winged One (Mr. Warrior?) Loved having time with your poem. Poetry hugs ... CayCay

Brandy Nicole

Date: 4/10/2019 10:33:00 PM

"Two swans appear falling in love" Indeed, if they continue to curl around each other in this way. :) This is beautiful my dear friend. Your words softly glide along the page. ~ Brandy

M. L. Kiser

Date: 4/10/2019 8:25:00 PM

A beautiful poem for beautiful birds; they are amazing to watch.

Ravi Sathasivam

Date: 4/10/2019 6:40:00 AM

Beautiful and well penned. Thanks for sharing it.

Susan Ashley

Date: 4/9/2019 6:36:00 PM

I was enraptured by the purity and beauty of your poem, bro bro, especially so with this line; ‘With a mesmeric moon to entice the endless night’ - a simply gorgeous verse amongst many in your stunning piece, my talented big bro. Best wishes for a win! Love, light and swans.. your somewhat sane sissy <3

Heidi Sands

Date: 4/9/2019 4:30:00 PM

I knew I was going to love this one. Beautiful! :)

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 4/9/2019 12:44:00 PM

A gorgeous scene you have painted with your lovely poetic words WW. This should do well in the contest. Have a wonderful Easter my friend. : ) xxoo