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Suddenly Swans

Suddenly swans descend on a peaceful pond, breaking the silence found on a lonely bench. I follow every graceful move as though we were dancing to music only shared in moments golden. I wonder if they notice the intrusion on their evening swim. It is as though time has stopped and allowed a gift. I stood and walked back into my world, vowing to reflect when I need to smile. 4/8/19

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Susan Ashley

Date: 5/30/2019 10:15:00 PM

It is such pleasure to re-read this mesmerizing poem once again and offer you my heartiest congratulations for your excellent win, Wren. A beautiful gem, dear poet. Warmest wishes always, my inspiring friend.. ~Susan

Wren Rushing
Date: 6/1/2019 9:09:00 AM

Thank you Susan for your kind words! Have a wonderful weekend my friend!

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 4/28/2019 9:50:00 PM

The vision of that beauty stays with us doesn't it. This is lovely Wren! Congratulations on your wonderful third placement! : )

Wren Rushing
Date: 4/29/2019 8:19:00 PM

Thank you Connie!

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib

Date: 4/26/2019 10:19:00 PM

Just lovely. They are magical, you bring us their magic in this write. Congratulations on your win, and thank you! xomo

Wren Rushing
Date: 4/27/2019 9:33:00 AM

Thank you Maureen for your comments and thanks for sponsoring the contest!

P.S. Awtry

Date: 4/26/2019 1:34:00 PM

Congratulations on your podium finish! :)

Wren Rushing
Date: 4/27/2019 9:31:00 AM

Thank you P.S.!

Vijay Pandit

Date: 4/18/2019 7:48:00 AM

They are a joy...splendidly depicted Wren..all the best my friend.

Wren Rushing
Date: 4/18/2019 11:45:00 AM

Thank you Vijay, it is always good to hear from you my dear friend!

CayCay Jennings

Date: 4/13/2019 5:23:00 PM

A great poem of depth concerning swans, smiles and moments separate from routine's time. I thoroughly enjoyed. CayCay

Wren Rushing
Date: 4/16/2019 8:15:00 PM

Thank you CayCay for your kind words! God bless you my friend!

Susan Ashley

Date: 4/9/2019 6:46:00 PM

The graceful beauty of your poem makes me smile, Wren, and I especially love the wistful flavor of your lovely last line. Superb artistry, my dear friend. Best wishes for a win.. ~Susan

Wren Rushing
Date: 4/10/2019 8:03:00 PM

Thank you Susan! I am so glad to hear from you my dear friend!

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 4/9/2019 7:41:00 AM

Hello Wren Rushing, this is a beautiful scene with your words. As i read this poem i could see these swans. Have a nice day my friend.

Wren Rushing
Date: 4/10/2019 8:02:00 PM

Thank you Darlene! Have wonderful evening my friend!

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 4/8/2019 11:44:00 PM

Wren, this is a beautiful image. Good luck in the contest! I feel this is a winner.

Wren Rushing
Date: 4/10/2019 8:01:00 PM

Thank you Caren!