Suddenly Senior (Englyn)

Offered by illusion, I trod the light.
Thinner than emotion, 
My shadow lost its motion
And took all the attentions.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Winter Avatar
October 1, 2008 at 2:45 PM
Congratulations my friend on your win in Brian's contest! Well done! Love, Rahs : )
Jordan Avatar
September 20, 2008 at 5:50 AM
Otsenre - An excellent write - leaves much for thought - a gift - God Bless
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