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Suddenly Alone

Suddenly alone
On my own
Love left me
We are both free
I did the best I could
So did she

Suddenly alone
In our home
Love left me
I can if I try
Hear her voice
Crying goodbye

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Line Gauthier

May 9, 2021 at 3:51 PM

Very moving, Timothy ~

Timothy Mcguire

November 9, 2021 at 9:18 PM

Thank you so much!

Jennifer Proxenos

December 6, 2020 at 8:38 AM

A sad real life situation, sorry Timothy, hope you are well, look after yourself. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.

Timothy Mcguire

November 9, 2021 at 9:18 PM

Thank you Jennifer!

Tom Cunningham

November 19, 2020 at 12:48 PM

A sad emotional write Timothy, I hope you are ok. Tom

Timothy Mcguire

November 20, 2020 at 11:20 AM

All is well Tom hope the same for you. Been laying low with all the craziness here in the US. Just now thinking about writing again. Nice to hear form you.

Caren Krutsinger

November 18, 2020 at 6:50 PM

This heartfelt poem has me sending you prayers from Kansas Tim.

Timothy Mcguire

November 20, 2020 at 11:20 AM

Thank you Karen

Gershon Wolf

November 18, 2020 at 5:34 PM

A short write that packs a powerful punch, Timothy. To hear her voice must tear at your heartstrings... This must be a difficult time for you now. May God be with you.. Very nice to see your posts on the Soup today. Warmest wishes, Gershon

Timothy Mcguire

November 20, 2020 at 11:22 AM

Thanks Gershon, I hope all is well with you and yours. Been laying low with all the craziness going on here in the US. Just now feeling like writing again.