''suddenly''

Breathe into me my last breath.On the floor there is nothing left.Heart,Heart,why won't
you start?Save me,obey me,I'm not ready to go.Life drained,my family pained.Oh,what a
twisted fate.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Tacito Avatar
February 28, 2011 at 10:32 AM
Oh my goodness...Kacey...damn. Strong & a little frightening. Great job w/capturing this moment!
Sweetheart Avatar
February 27, 2011 at 7:57 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup.. so enjoyed reading your creative write tonight.. hope your time on Soup will be fun and filled with sharing with luv..
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