Ann Gilmour Poet Imagism

Suddenly

pink
   
   candy floss 
     
      clouds 

meander




interceptor 

    appears

havoc ensues




suddenly 

  April showers



Written 20th June 2019

3rd PLACE
Contest:   Choice 11 Imagism Style
Sponsor:  Brian Strand

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Susan Ashley June 24, 2019 at 9:17 PM Beautiful and captivating imagery, Ann, delicately expressed. Congratulations on your wonderful win. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan Ann Gilmour June 26, 2019 at 1:21 AM Thank you so much Susan so glad you liked my poem and thanks for your lovely comments and congrats. With kindest thoughts Ann xx

Vijay Pandit June 21, 2019 at 6:50 AM I am back with congrats, Ann... on your well deserved podium win in Brian's contest. Ann Gilmour June 21, 2019 at 10:47 AM Many thanks Vijay for your congrats and your kind support, I do appreciate it and I was delighted with my 3rd place in the contest. With kindest thoughts Ann xx

Vijay Pandit June 20, 2019 at 8:23 AM So well done, Ann--I can't believe this is your first attempt..those images you painted surely lead to April showers. Ann Gilmour June 20, 2019 at 11:59 AM I truly appreciate your comments Vijay and thank you so much for your visit. With kindest thoughts Ann xx

Gershon Wolf June 19, 2019 at 8:44 PM This certainly checks the best of the boxes of what imagism is/should be, Ann. Clarity (midst the rain)! :) gw Ann Gilmour June 20, 2019 at 12:48 AM Many thanks Gershon for your visit and I appreciate your comments, as this is my first attempt at Imagism poetry, so delighted to hear it ticks all the boxes - thank you! With kindest thoughts Ann xx