Suddenly

pink candy floss clouds meander interceptor appears havoc ensues suddenly April showers Written 20th June 2019 3rd PLACE Contest: Choice 11 Imagism Style Sponsor: Brian Strand

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Susan Ashley

Date: 6/24/2019 9:17:00 PM

Beautiful and captivating imagery, Ann, delicately expressed. Congratulations on your wonderful win. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

Ann Gilmour
Date: 6/26/2019 1:21:00 AM

Thank you so much Susan so glad you liked my poem and thanks for your lovely comments and congrats. With kindest thoughts Ann xx

Vijay Pandit

Date: 6/21/2019 6:50:00 AM

I am back with congrats, Ann... on your well deserved podium win in Brian's contest.

Ann Gilmour
Date: 6/21/2019 10:47:00 AM

Many thanks Vijay for your congrats and your kind support, I do appreciate it and I was delighted with my 3rd place in the contest. With kindest thoughts Ann xx

Vijay Pandit

Date: 6/20/2019 8:23:00 AM

So well done, Ann--I can't believe this is your first attempt..those images you painted surely lead to April showers.

Ann Gilmour
Date: 6/20/2019 11:59:00 AM

I truly appreciate your comments Vijay and thank you so much for your visit. With kindest thoughts Ann xx

Gershon Wolf

Date: 6/19/2019 8:44:00 PM

This certainly checks the best of the boxes of what imagism is/should be, Ann. Clarity (midst the rain)! :) gw

Ann Gilmour
Date: 6/20/2019 12:48:00 AM

Many thanks Gershon for your visit and I appreciate your comments, as this is my first attempt at Imagism poetry, so delighted to hear it ticks all the boxes - thank you! With kindest thoughts Ann xx