Sudden Summer Shower

Sky robin egg blue
Thunder clouds come rolling in
Steam lifts off the grass
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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June 22, 2014 at 11:57 AM
Hi Joe, Congratulations, enjoyed stopping by to view, every featured poem, on the soups Home Page. Take Care & Have Fun this coming week..... Luve Linda
Mehta Avatar
June 20, 2014 at 7:15 AM
Congratulations on your poem being featured this week. Thanks for sharing it
A   Avatar
June 9, 2014 at 4:09 PM
I enjoy the haiku format myself,, you are very good... Linda
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June 9, 2014 at 8:23 AM
Joe, amazing haiku. I like the thunder cloud imagery rolling in... Linda
Murphy Avatar
June 9, 2014 at 12:18 PM
High praise, than you very much. I love the haiku format.
Mehta Avatar
June 4, 2014 at 5:32 AM
Nicely penned haiku with lovely images, Joe
Murphy Avatar
June 4, 2014 at 11:46 AM
Thank you. That is high praise from you. I love the Haiku because it heightens the layers of complexity inherent in word choice.
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