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Sudden Summer Shower

Sky robin egg blue Thunder clouds come rolling in Steam lifts off the grass

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Date: 6/22/2014 11:57:00 AM
Hi Joe, Congratulations, enjoyed stopping by to view, every featured poem, on the soups Home Page. Take Care & Have Fun this coming week..... Luve Linda
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Date: 6/20/2014 7:15:00 AM
Congratulations on your poem being featured this week. Thanks for sharing it
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Date: 6/9/2014 4:09:00 PM
I enjoy the haiku format myself,, you are very good... Linda
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Date: 6/9/2014 8:23:00 AM
Joe, amazing haiku. I like the thunder cloud imagery rolling in... Linda
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Joe Murphy
Date: 6/9/2014 12:18:00 PM
High praise, than you very much. I love the haiku format.
Date: 6/4/2014 5:32:00 AM
Nicely penned haiku with lovely images, Joe
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Joe Murphy
Date: 6/4/2014 11:46:00 AM
Thank you. That is high praise from you. I love the Haiku because it heightens the layers of complexity inherent in word choice.

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