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Sudden Rain

Wind suddenly rules the day with strong hands as dusts spread their tentacles beckoning on the sky. The sun quickly withdraws into its shell the cloud bursts open to spray inhabitants beneath. Olusegun Arowolo ;Date:1-20-2014 CONTEST:"through my Window" sponsored by Nette Onclaud

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Date: 1/27/2014 11:53:00 PM
A lovely touch of nature ....you have such a way. SuZ
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Date: 1/25/2014 3:20:00 PM
fine nature's view from your pane, olu!.. sweet conmgrats on your win in my contest!.. huggs
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Date: 1/23/2014 4:51:00 PM
Congrats on your winning work..Way to go!!! Sara
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Date: 1/23/2014 10:08:00 AM
Congrats ..A big win...I was captured by the first line. BG
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Date: 1/23/2014 8:10:00 AM
Beautiful interpretation ands congratulations on the win, Olusegun
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