Sudden Rain

Wind suddenly rules the day with strong hands
         as dusts spread their tentacles
               beckoning on the sky.

     The sun quickly withdraws into its shell
          the cloud bursts open to spray
                  inhabitants beneath.



Olusegun Arowolo  ;Date:1-20-2014

CONTEST:"through my Window" sponsored by Nette Onclaud
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Delaney Avatar
January 27, 2014 at 11:53 PM
A lovely touch of nature ....you have such a way. SuZ
Onclaud Avatar
January 25, 2014 at 3:20 PM
fine nature's view from your pane, olu!.. sweet conmgrats on your win in my contest!.. huggs
Kendrick Avatar
January 23, 2014 at 4:51 PM
Congrats on your winning work..Way to go!!! Sara
Gorelick Avatar
January 23, 2014 at 10:08 AM
Congrats ..A big win...I was captured by the first line. BG
Mehta Avatar
January 23, 2014 at 8:10 AM
Beautiful interpretation ands congratulations on the win, Olusegun
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