Sudden Gust of Geese

sudden gust of geese fly past window eye-level - furious honking

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/28/2023 1:56:00 PM

I wonder if they are flying south already. Maybe they think an early winter or just some that stay here all year long because they are too lazy to fly those long distances. Thanks for sharing this creative one with us and for dropping by my page. Sara

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/29/2023 9:20:00 AM

This is in Minnesota! Just a few of them.

Gershon Wolf

Date: 8/27/2023 7:52:00 PM

Move your car, will you? You're blocking me bloody goose!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/28/2023 1:42:00 PM

Honk honk!

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 8/27/2023 1:44:00 PM

A creative/fun write. I enjoyed it. honking~honking away... Have a fun day.............

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/27/2023 2:39:00 PM

Truly! Truly! LOL

Robert Lindley

Date: 8/27/2023 7:13:00 AM

As a kid in the 1960's I loved to watch the geese and the ducks fly by in the hundreds heading South to warmer weather. Beautiful haiku my friend. God bless.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/27/2023 9:59:00 AM

Thank you so much! Hugs

Valsa George

Date: 8/26/2023 9:50:00 PM

Such a lovely experience to watch them flying at eye level ! Lovely haiku dear Kim.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/27/2023 6:31:00 AM

Truly! :)

Eve Roper

Date: 8/26/2023 8:03:00 PM

the do make a lot of honking. :)

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/26/2023 8:25:00 PM

Was a cool sight! :)