Sudden Gust of Geese

sudden gust of geese
fly past window eye-level -
furious honking
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Kendrick Avatar
August 28, 2023 at 1:56 PM
I wonder if they are flying south already. Maybe they think an early winter or just some that stay here all year long because they are too lazy to fly those long distances. Thanks for sharing this creative one with us and for dropping by my page. Sara
Rodrigues Avatar
August 29, 2023 at 9:20 AM
This is in Minnesota! Just a few of them.
Wolf Avatar
August 27, 2023 at 7:52 PM
Move your car, will you? You're blocking me bloody goose!
Rodrigues Avatar
August 28, 2023 at 1:42 PM
Honk honk!
Goldsmith Avatar
August 27, 2023 at 1:44 PM
A creative/fun write. I enjoyed it. honking~honking away... Have a fun day.............
Rodrigues Avatar
August 27, 2023 at 2:39 PM
Truly! Truly! LOL
Lindley Avatar
August 27, 2023 at 7:13 AM
As a kid in the 1960's I loved to watch the geese and the ducks fly by in the hundreds heading South to warmer weather. Beautiful haiku my friend. God bless.
Rodrigues Avatar
August 27, 2023 at 9:59 AM
Thank you so much! Hugs
George Avatar
August 26, 2023 at 9:50 PM
Such a lovely experience to watch them flying at eye level ! Lovely haiku dear Kim.
Rodrigues Avatar
August 27, 2023 at 6:31 AM
Truly! :)
Roper Avatar
August 26, 2023 at 8:03 PM
the do make a lot of honking. :)
Rodrigues Avatar
August 26, 2023 at 8:25 PM
Was a cool sight! :)
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