Sudden Beauty

The trees were thick, their needles sharp As I stubbornly fought my way. So heavenly, I heard a harp The scene in the clearing that day. Jagged peaks in lake reflected, Astounding because unexpected. For John's contest "A Nature Verse"
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Freeman Avatar
September 18, 2011 at 1:59 PM
Beautiful Joyce, I am sure this would have been in the top three. Agape, Moses
Kendrick Avatar
September 15, 2011 at 9:57 AM
So descriptive and expressive that I can see the scene..Enjoyed reading this morn..Good luck in John's contest..Thanks for stopping by and letting me know that I placed in the contest..Sara
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September 15, 2011 at 9:08 AM
Beautiful verse here Joyce...enjoyed.Best wishes.
Sweetheart Avatar
September 14, 2011 at 11:46 AM
An elegant way with words Joyce so utterly beautiful in this piece.. good luck in the contest luv.
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