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Sud Ull Tea

Staring uneasily through the smoke I do Put myself in this predicament with nothing to gain but a vacant mind. But then again. . .Inspiration comes with a price to pay. Incomplete connections spell-check my ambitions Only this time, I know it will be different. Delete the next line for sensitivities sake You will never know the real me, and I choose to keep it that way.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 4/16/2009 3:51:00 PM
This poem is very good. I love the line "incomplete connections, spell-check, my ambitions." Spell check was my writing savior!" In High school, I most often mad A and sometimesB on the content, but that spelling was at the other end...often. I love spell check. Thank you for your most welcomed comment on my poem today. Inspiration>>>try the member contests. Practice make perfect as my dad used to say. I encourage you to try some if you haven't yet. Stay Happy, Dane
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