Suction and Phantom

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People are running for the illusion, I observe. And believe what the crow says and swerve. It can be found on the back of a military vehicle. The country will soar to the hump of the clouds lull. Even though the disagreement and ten quarrels. Also, despite the gloom and the weather trials. we were unsure about the despotic reign of the ego Men are humiliated by this act, as well as their credo At what point did tyrants' control become a collar? Deliverance for those who are on the verge of blander. Where are the intellects, and where is the truth? We hope that chaos and disorder might result in soothe Written: August 24, 2021

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L Milton Hankins

Date: 8/25/2021 9:50:00 AM

I am intrigued by your last line, Lasaad: "...chaos and disorder might result in soothe." A hope, yes; perchance....

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 8/25/2021 1:48:00 AM

If you're referring to the Taliban, you may as well lose all hope.

Sotto Poet
Date: 8/25/2021 4:09:00 AM

There is nothing really surprising; backroom deals are negotiated, and what we see is often quite different.