Such Tearful Words

Such tearful words said at my sister’s wake,
      her short life, beyond my comprehension.
          I try to stay strong for my daughter’s sake,
              trepidation allures apprehension.........
                   Where’s the help for suicide prevention?
                   Her goodbye letter hit me really deep,
              for now she lays in a permanent sleep.
          If time moves this slow, how do I advance?
     Her withered white roses I shall still keep, 
I just wish she gave loves light one more chance.

                      If angels do weep, can I taste her tears?
                           Because I swear I can still hear her cry.
                                On her final day I could sense her fears,
                                   why couldn’t she give tomorrow a try?
                                      I knew deep down she was ready to die.
                                      If leaving brought her joy I should feel ease,
                                   but all I wish for is one more hug please…
                               Oh, why did her own life did she wish to take?
                            I hear her voice sometimes, it’s just a tease,
                        such tearful words said at my sister’s wake.


Dizain: Ten lines of 10 syllables each line Rhyme Scheme: A-B-A-B-B-C-C-D-C-D Contest: Two Stanzas - Two Only - Poetry Contest Sponsor, Broken Wings Date Written: July 19, 2016
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Neumann Avatar
July 27, 2016 at 3:44 AM
Congratulation son your win.
Daniel Avatar
July 27, 2016 at 12:34 AM
Back to congratulate you on your well deserved win, Laura:)
Devnath  Avatar
July 26, 2016 at 1:14 PM
Poignant poem read from you. Done well. Congrats on your win my friend, bl
Smith Avatar
July 26, 2016 at 11:20 AM
Painfully beautiful, congratulations LuLoo...
Scars Avatar
July 26, 2016 at 11:26 AM
thank you Charlie :)-luloo
Kimathi Avatar
July 26, 2016 at 6:14 AM
I love the way you've designed your verses, like arrow tails!! :-o Congrats Laura, for your placement in the contest!! ;-)
Scars Avatar
July 26, 2016 at 11:26 AM
thank you Teddy :)-luloo
Leiser Avatar
July 26, 2016 at 12:05 AM
Such a heartfelt poem written with great skill, Laura. Congrats on your win!
Scars Avatar
July 26, 2016 at 11:26 AM
many thanks Laura :)-luloo
Roper Avatar
July 25, 2016 at 7:54 PM
Laura, congratulations on your win, so heartbreaking, and love the form. Thank you so very much for your congratulations on my poem , “Free Its Soul Bound Wild Stallion”. Hugs Eve
Scars Avatar
July 25, 2016 at 8:31 PM
thank you lovely Eve :)-luloo
Chansarkar Avatar
July 25, 2016 at 7:12 PM
You have brought pain out so beautifully Laura,congrats on your win!
Scars Avatar
July 25, 2016 at 7:37 PM
thank you very much Sara :)-luloo
Haight Avatar
July 25, 2016 at 6:26 PM
Dear Luloo, so sad is this pain in your heart, and how well you express it in your poetry. Congratulations on your fine win in the contest. Hugs, Sandra
Scars Avatar
July 25, 2016 at 7:37 PM
thank you sweet Sandra, be blessed :)-luloo
Canerdy Avatar
July 25, 2016 at 4:26 PM
This is so heart-wrenching--and very well-written. Congratulations on your win. I hope that writing it helped. Janice
Scars Avatar
July 25, 2016 at 7:36 PM
Thank you Janice, and yes all the writing I do about her loss helps more than I can ever express. Her death is my greatest inspiration for writing... I owe her for that because I would not be able to touch others who have been through what I have if not for her...:)-luloo
Allison Avatar
July 25, 2016 at 3:30 PM
I know you get so much inspiration from your lovely late sister Karen - a sad but lovely poem:-) She would be so so proud of you LuLoo:-) congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
Scars Avatar
July 25, 2016 at 7:35 PM
aww thanks Jan, that was very nice... :)-luloo
Warrior Avatar
July 25, 2016 at 3:18 PM
Congrats! my friend Laura on your win...such a sad but beautiful write...god bless...^WW^
Scars Avatar
July 25, 2016 at 7:34 PM
thank you WW :)-luloo
Lane Avatar
July 25, 2016 at 2:53 PM
Congratulations on this win, Laura. I love the shape you created.
Scars Avatar
July 25, 2016 at 3:04 PM
thank you lady, congrats to you also :)-luloo
Daniel Avatar
July 20, 2016 at 1:08 AM
This is a soul-touching beauty for your sister, Laura:) Sure to win:)
Scars Avatar
July 21, 2016 at 3:58 PM
many thanks sweet Jo:)-luloo
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