Such Gifts As These

G rowth requires the reins of pain, the curing singe of fire
I nside we shrink, we quiver, quake but we rise inspired
V ictory through vice, challenge hardens resolve, lifts higher 
I nnocence belayed, tried, can raise us whole, entire. 
N ever damn the pain, decline the fight, rise, with life conspire
G od knows what's best this I believe what comes must transpire.

T he faint of heart, will never know the crucible, the pyre
H aving never risked the plunge, never left the flowery briar
A nd angrily bemoaned the dark, the pain, the fret conspired
N ever giving thanks for the test, the trials which seem most dire 
K iss the ring, the ground, blow kisses skyward to the Holy Crier
S uch gifts as these diverse and free, all necessary and desired.


Contest Count Your Blessings
Date: 11/14/12
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Brown Avatar
December 5, 2012 at 6:59 AM
Congrats on your win in Kim's "Count Your Blessings" contest Debbie. Love, Carol
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December 3, 2012 at 1:24 AM
Love this poem. Congrats on your win!
A   Avatar
November 29, 2012 at 8:39 PM
Debbie, congratulations with your beautiful winning poem, in Kim's "Counting Your Blessings" take care :-) always~ PD
Johnson Avatar
November 29, 2012 at 8:18 PM
Congratulations debbie. Great reading. Soup mail. Love, joyce
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November 29, 2012 at 8:18 PM
Cingratulations Debbie; this is one great poem. Many blessings. Lucilla
Kendrick Avatar
November 29, 2012 at 1:22 PM
Way to go..Outstanding win..Sara
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November 29, 2012 at 12:48 PM
Congratulations debbie, me thinketh this was good choice or winner xx
Song Avatar
November 29, 2012 at 12:18 PM
This poem is EXACTLY WHY U R ONE OF MY FAV POETS!!! Well expressed entry on WHY we must ENDURE and the necessity to be cured in a fire! Love this one, Deb! Fav'd, saved, and raved! :) gwendolen
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November 29, 2012 at 9:52 AM
Wonderful write and message Debbie....congrats on your awesome win! Hugs
Liwayway Avatar
November 29, 2012 at 8:55 AM
super congrats my friend Debbie on your grand win. lovely poem you wrote..cheers!!(^_^)
Lamoureux Avatar
November 29, 2012 at 8:43 AM
Breathtaking piece, congrats on we'll deserved win!
Merryman Avatar
November 29, 2012 at 8:23 AM
A unique take on being thankful, but so true. Sometimes our trials are our biggest blessings. Congrats on your 1st place win in my contest, Debbie! Love, Kim
Tsiluma Avatar
November 16, 2012 at 8:20 AM
When you put it like this, it makes utmost sense - without lessons there cannot be growth, and unfortunately lessons come with their amount of pain. Thus, we should be thankful we get to grow. Well written Debbie!
Ellison Avatar
November 15, 2012 at 1:42 PM
These are always fun to read and see how you manage to use the starting letters! Must try one... good one, hugs Jack
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