Stephen Pennell Poet Sonnet

Succumb

Bring your saucy smile that spark in your eye 
give me sanctuary from satans hell
just that smile and a twinkle in your eye
I'm sent soaring into seventh heaven 

conjure magic spells, and charms that you weave 
my imaginations dreams delivered
no magicians magic wands need waving 
just an acclamation of love desired 

succumb now and save my suffering soul
Raise a white flag and surrender your whole
don't be wondering should I show resolve
No harm in surrender love is the goal 

Surrender your body  your heart and soul
when cupids arrow hits body and soul


comp entry 05/08/2016

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Becca Teagan August 17, 2016 at 5:17 PM I actually love your poem! It's so cute! It didn't really meet the strict requirements of iambic pentameter and rhyme scheme I was looking for, but for the theme I really love it, Stephen! :) Stephen Pennell August 17, 2016 at 5:23 PM Cheers becca no surprises lol tried for fun and ir was good comp won by the real poets . Cheers deffo over my pay grade lol