Succulents

Culinary resonations my senses please
Blowtorch trimming the tapering of cheese 
Cremated lactations dance on the fan’s breeze
Crab forks impaling young peas 
Lightly dusting salt of the seas
Grindings of exotic teas
Marinades my taste buds tease
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Sweetheart Avatar
March 25, 2011 at 5:52 PM
Awesome Robb.. a feast fit for a King ..or poet.. magnificent descriptions in each line.. gooed luck in the new contest luv..
Dietrich Avatar
March 25, 2011 at 2:40 PM
oh, at first I thought this was for that food contest until I noticed it was monorhyme. It is very descriptive, If you changed the syllable counts, you could use it in john's contest!
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