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Succulent Delight

Succulent delight

Perpetual motion flight

Suspended in time


Entry in Daily Ritual contest
8th Place - Yippee, my first top 10!

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Phyllis Babcock

May 14, 2016 at 11:58 AM

Nicely written. Congrats on being featured. love phyl

Dr.Ram Mehta

April 29, 2010 at 8:04 PM

Congrats on the win

Andrea Dietrich

April 28, 2010 at 9:41 PM

GREAT job, Joe. A big congrats for your first top ten!! andrea

Margaret Foster

April 27, 2010 at 8:37 PM

Hi Joe. Congratulations on your success with this delightful haiku. Lovely word succulent....Margaret

April 27, 2010 at 1:50 PM

What an uplifting view. Congratulations on your first top 10 in Raul's contest. Yeah!!! Wishing you ongoing success with your writing. Karen

Jimmy Anderson

April 27, 2010 at 8:52 AM

Congratulations on your win in the contest, Bro! Very nice...Jimmy

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

April 27, 2010 at 6:50 AM

Congrats Joe on your winning poem in the contest... with your amazing words to depict the photo of the hummingbird.. enjoy your special victory ..luv.. "Sweetheart"

Carol Sunshine Brown

April 27, 2010 at 5:55 AM

Congratulations on your win in Raul Moreno's contest "Daily Ritual" Joe. Love, Carol

Raul Moreno

April 27, 2010 at 3:02 AM

Joe, congratulations on your success in my Daily Ritual contest...Raul

Constance La France

April 26, 2010 at 2:55 PM

Very pretty words, in this haiku.. now for your assignment.. could you write a poem on the topic of ... the importance of living in the moment.. love constance