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Succulent Delight

Succulent delight Perpetual motion flight Suspended in time Entry in Daily Ritual contest 8th Place - Yippee, my first top 10!

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Phyllis Babcock

Date: 5/14/2016 11:58:00 AM

Nicely written. Congrats on being featured. love phyl

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 4/29/2010 8:04:00 PM

Congrats on the win

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/28/2010 9:41:00 PM

GREAT job, Joe. A big congrats for your first top ten!! andrea

Margaret Foster

Date: 4/27/2010 8:37:00 PM

Hi Joe. Congratulations on your success with this delightful haiku. Lovely word succulent....Margaret

Date: 4/27/2010 1:50:00 PM

What an uplifting view. Congratulations on your first top 10 in Raul's contest. Yeah!!! Wishing you ongoing success with your writing. Karen

Jimmy Anderson

Date: 4/27/2010 8:52:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in the contest, Bro! Very nice...Jimmy

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 4/27/2010 6:50:00 AM

Congrats Joe on your winning poem in the contest... with your amazing words to depict the photo of the hummingbird.. enjoy your special victory ..luv.. "Sweetheart"

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 4/27/2010 5:55:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in Raul Moreno's contest "Daily Ritual" Joe. Love, Carol

Raul Moreno

Date: 4/27/2010 3:02:00 AM

Joe, congratulations on your success in my Daily Ritual contest...Raul

Constance La France

Date: 4/26/2010 2:55:00 PM

Very pretty words, in this haiku.. now for your assignment.. could you write a poem on the topic of ... the importance of living in the moment.. love constance

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 4/26/2010 5:49:00 AM

such a pleasant mono rhyme! that word succulant sure is....funny how some words just sound like what they are. Light & Love

Sara Kendrick

Date: 4/26/2010 5:45:00 AM

Great interpertation of the picture...Should be in the winner's circle..Keep the creative pen flowing...Sara