Succulent Bright Deep Red

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Inspired by Joseph May 6/19/2023

Spring gives life to summer moist heat. Soul melt, but the breeze gives comfort. Shower rainbow bath floral scent. Soaked in pure golden sunrays; sweet. Suntan tame does not discomfort; Sense for the lightest of feet spent. Sensible is nature's heartbeat Steady and inspire recomfort So, while flamboyant and content. Season change and attest complete Sadness it wistful mis-comfort. Stem hibiscus nectar has went. Springtime sung as gallery plants Succulent bright, deep heaven grants. 6/19/2023 Trilonnet Poetry Contest 3. Sponsored by: Joseph May

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Len Gasun

Date: 7/2/2023 8:24:00 PM

A very beautiful triolinnet this is my dear poet friend Eve. Ringing as a wonderful nature song for me. I love it a lot. Thank you so much for sharing. Congratulations on your win and this superb poem! God bless you always. Soupmail for you.

Bill Baker

Date: 6/26/2023 4:10:00 PM

Lovely imagery and a photo to match your poetic descriptions. Good entry for the contest, Eve. We have many Hibiscus plants in our flower beds and on our back porch. The hummingbird that look just like the photo come regularly to feed and please us with their beauty. I liked the starting "S" for each line, very creative. Good luck in the contest my friend. Bill