Succubus

How troublesome
to see the devil behind
smiling eyes

to see a shell of beauty
hiding hatred,
	crouching like a cat
behind the guise of Venus.

Wonder
	wanders
			down paths primal
to the distant majesty of the morning star
and lucid dreams.

How vile to be lured by bashful, eternal, silence
within a blossom of such petulant power.

Jupiter may rise, be as bright as she,
	may dull the glamour
	but, malcontent lurks, languid…
	beneath a skin of porcelain
		with periwinkle orbs.

Beware her pretense
	for she is unashamed … having been wronged
		she is a sink whole
		seeking recompense.



Date: 6/16/12
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Ludden Avatar
July 14, 2012 at 2:50 PM
As you at least are attracted to incubi, (whether you admit it or not) I think every man must react to the succubus with some amount of pleasure. Honesty before assumed purity, n'est ce pas? Petulant power, indeed! -Dean
Burch Avatar
June 22, 2012 at 2:24 AM
well done 'highness'...big congrats on your win!! this is soooo awsome...love ya, deb
Williams Avatar
June 22, 2012 at 1:05 AM
Debbie, congrats on your win...David
Dietrich Avatar
June 20, 2012 at 9:11 PM
Yes, I just knew this one would be on a winners' list. Big congrats, Debs.
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
June 20, 2012 at 11:58 AM
Congratulations on your winning place xx
The Drunken Poet Avatar
June 20, 2012 at 10:14 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win!
K. Avatar
June 20, 2012 at 8:31 AM
Super congrats to you Debbie :D! This was a joy for me to read and I think you captured the succubus wonderfully here and I certainly like the daunting tone you have here, this is wonderful to read aloud-- I also enjoyed how you formatted the lines here...:) Hugs to you :D and also I'd like to thank you for the fave, means a lot to me :)
Brown Avatar
June 20, 2012 at 6:54 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win in Chris' "Be Yourself" contest Debbie. Love, Carol
Song Avatar
June 20, 2012 at 3:59 AM
Yep! I just knew this one was grand...you write of the most intriguing topics..I would love to be your cleaning lady one day and snoop thru all the books U read! hahahah.....Love, Gwendolen
O'Leary Avatar
June 18, 2012 at 1:02 PM
Powerful images and contrasts... and yes 'many people like this'... Terry
Dietrich Avatar
June 17, 2012 at 12:59 AM
So intense, Debs. I loved that line "sink whole" playing on the other word. Awesome writing!
Song Avatar
June 16, 2012 at 8:01 PM
The medieval temptess has met him in his dreams...BEWARE...succubare! Great entry for Amy's contest, Debbie. You got great form, lady! :) Gwendolen
Sivey Avatar
June 16, 2012 at 7:38 PM
This is a wonderful write Debbie! I really enjoyed the twist between good and evil and how close in likeness they really can be. You must be vigilant to see the truth! I love this poem! Great work!!
A   Avatar
June 16, 2012 at 6:27 PM
D G., hello! I love this line "beneath a skin of porcelain" i hope she gets what she seeks..beneath a skin of porcelain
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