Succubus

kiss my neck
bite it through
watch it bleed 
my love for you
suck it up
lick it clean
i watch from above
deeply in dream
and then i think
and now i scream
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Kendrick Avatar
August 10, 2010 at 11:03 AM
Interesting thoughts that you have penned in this one..A different kind of love for sure..Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work about Robert Frost written in Narrative form..I enjoyed looking him up and doing some research about his life since he is one of my favorite authors..Sara
Brown Avatar
August 10, 2010 at 6:21 AM
Another day of fasinating reading ahead of me I see. Thank you for sharing your poetry with us Solomon. I enjoyed reading your poetry today. Wishing you the best always. Love, Carol
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August 9, 2010 at 9:37 PM
Wow!! is this like some kinda of vampire,, dream,,cool,..p.d.
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