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Succinct

Caution the freeway Muffle the the noise Scour the earth Search out his boys With regret Inform them their father lay dead Succinct in his bed And tell the to put aside there grief The time has come to anoint a new Chief

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 7/21/2011 2:20:00 PM
after figurehead gone..hard to elect one to replace that 'chief' with new one Christopher.. does this incline Native American flavor luv? strong powerful moving words...
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Date: 7/21/2011 10:37:00 AM
Succinct pretty much sums this up. There are a few grammatical errors but that's just me being a grammar nazi, the poem is strong and powerful and emotional. Keep it up x
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Date: 7/21/2011 8:11:00 AM
Very good write. Jay
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