Success Or Failure's Failure - Guts and Gain

Success  or  Failure’s Failure


Was it success or failure’s failure,
The will to win or a refusal to lose.
No guts, no glory!! – no pain, no gain!!

He stayed the course – unnoticed,
walked early through the cold mist,
prayed to a heartless, distant god,

answered the call every morning
to rise, to stiffen his back, move forward
toward another fading sunset.

No crowds lined dawn’s damp streets,
his only applause the sound of
windblown debris clattering on concrete,

no ribbons rewarded his perseverance,
his laurel wreath a sweat-stained pillow,
his trophy case a mantel of children’s pictures.

It took guts to amass such gains
the sweet touch of love’s regeneration
the continuum of  living family,

the footsteps of a life – following
a distant shadow at dawn.
Is it success – or failure’s failure?


John G. Lawless
7/5/2015
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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August 20, 2015 at 7:00 PM
what a sweet win... LINDA
A  Avatar
August 17, 2015 at 3:07 PM
John, congrats on your wonderful win. SKAT
A. Sharma Avatar
August 17, 2015 at 8:48 AM
Wow an amazing write John! Congrats on big win!
Allison Avatar
August 17, 2015 at 8:03 AM
thought provoking write John many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
Lawless Avatar
August 17, 2015 at 8:31 AM
Thanks Jan
Roper Avatar
August 16, 2015 at 9:04 PM
Congratulations on your win, John.
Lawless Avatar
August 17, 2015 at 8:31 AM
Thanks Eve always nice to hear from you.
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
August 16, 2015 at 8:03 PM
John, failure`s failure... =") nice thought provoking phrase you got there and well-described all through out the poem...insightful too! thank you for participating and CONGRATULATIONS!!.~Olive Eloisa
Lawless Avatar
August 17, 2015 at 8:31 AM
my pleasure to play in the contest
Nunez Avatar
July 6, 2015 at 10:05 AM
Wow...I like this. Makes one really think... Does success always have to mean fame in one's own field? Can't one be considered successful if at the end of the day he has done his best sans the trappings? To take the question further...if one is not successful the way the world defines the word, would it mean he's a failure? Or as you said, the negative word cannot be ascribed to his dedicated but simple lifestyle, hence failure's failure... a thought provoking write...I like this, John.
Lawless Avatar
August 17, 2015 at 8:30 AM
Kim, sorry to be so late in responding - life intervened, as it will. thanks for taking the time to read and comment on this poem. Your support and input are always appreciated.
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