Success

Your fortune is based on your brain 
Enlarge your horizon , which are hidden, 
Oh man!  Where is horrid smell
Don't be unsuccessful to be in hail. 

Aim for success,  not for perfection 
Struggle for challenges don't do prediction 
Oh man!  Where earth is plain 
From the heaven for success wisdom's are fallen. 

Move forward with your life, 
Pluck the success from edge of knife 
Remember your daily duties, 
Go accordingly with your responsibilities. 

Success needs to have delight, 
Moral character make polite 
Fruits are plucked,  when they got riped
Every facts and moments are first in life........

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Beata Agustin

Date: 11/9/2024 9:49:00 PM

Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.