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Success

Slowly the ladder of success one should climb if he wishes the achievement as his to claim!






(c) Demetrios Trifiatis
      21 February 2016

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Timothy Hicks

February 22, 2016 at 4:08 PM

All the more rewarding with holes in your jeans, calluses on your feet, and grazed knees. Well expressed. I had this same experience while taking a 8 day hike through the Saw-tooth Mountains ... the feeling you get when climbing to the top ... it is near to divine!

Demetrios Trifiatis

February 22, 2016 at 6:17 PM

Absolutely, that is the idea! Would you ever had the same feeling if someone had carried you to the top or had dropped you on the top? Certainly not! Thank you , Timothy!

Bl Devnath

February 22, 2016 at 12:35 PM

Again, reading a very nice poem from you,bl

Demetrios Trifiatis

February 22, 2016 at 6:18 PM

Thank you my friend, BL, you so kind!

Andrea Dietrich

February 21, 2016 at 12:38 PM

some people advance quite rapidly. I would take EITHER way at this point. haha (well, I feel successful in small ways at least)

Demetrios Trifiatis

February 22, 2016 at 8:01 AM

This is true! For the second point, whatever it suits you my dear, Andrea! Haha! Thank you for your lovely visit!

Richard Lamoureux

February 21, 2016 at 9:26 AM

Many seek the quick and easy way and ultimately fall off of their ladder or they find they are leaning against the wrong building.

Demetrios Trifiatis

February 22, 2016 at 7:59 AM

This happens very often my friend, Richard! Fortunately, I am retired! No ladders to climb but the BIG one! Haha! Thank you so much!

Anne-Lise Andresen

February 21, 2016 at 5:40 AM

- We have many downfall on our ladder ...... two steps up and one back, we have so unimaginably much to learn throughout our lives - Great written my friend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)