Success
It was a sunny day,
i remember going to a bay.
Holding my fathers hand ,
i remember walking in the sand.
I remember the day,
like it was yesterday.
But never would that memory
be true again.
coz i have come
too far away.
leaving the tender
relations far behind.
In order to achieve success.
Now successful
i turn back .
only to find no one to share my success,
I ran after success,
without knowing that the greatest
success is having some one close by.
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