Success

success
will not rest
at wind up  but start
pulled back in the bow awhile
seraphs linger in ride’s resist then fly high

imageryphilosophysuzette prime

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Paul Callus

July 25, 2024 at 2:01 PM

I'm impressed by this Suzette Prime delivery, Kim; in fact I'd have expected it to 'succeed' more and 'fly even higher'. Congrats & regards // paul

Kim Rodrigues

July 26, 2024 at 10:42 AM

Thank you for saying so, Paul! I really appreciate that! Hugs

Len Gasun

July 25, 2024 at 9:22 AM

Excellent poem about success crafted creatively in a beautiful form. Congratulations also on your win my dear poet friend! Thank you so much for sharing. God bless you always and your writings. Hugs

Kim Rodrigues

July 25, 2024 at 12:58 PM

Bless you and thank you, Len!

Unseeking Seeker

July 25, 2024 at 7:06 AM

Oh wow! I just cannot write like this ~ ‘seraphs linger in ride’s resist then fly high’. Warmest congratulations on your win, Kim

Kim Rodrigues

July 25, 2024 at 12:55 PM

I appreciate you, my friend!

Sara Kendrick

July 25, 2024 at 6:15 AM

Very nice winner. Way to go. Congratulations on your win. Sara K

Kim Rodrigues

July 25, 2024 at 6:25 AM

Thank you, Sara!

Beata Agustin

July 24, 2024 at 9:56 PM

Wow! Congratulations! Thanks for sharing this muse of yours... so wisdom-filled. God bless you.

Kim Rodrigues

July 25, 2024 at 6:25 AM

Thank you, Beata!

Gershon Wolf

July 16, 2024 at 7:07 PM

I think you nailed 'Success' with a bullseye here, Kim. (I can say 'bullseye,' without political content, right?). ~ Independent of the Gathering Political Storm, gw

Kim Rodrigues

July 17, 2024 at 5:43 AM

Because you are mature enough to realize as a poet and citizen that there are metaphors and there are threats. Thank you, my friend!