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Success

success will not rest at wind up but start pulled back in the bow awhile seraphs linger in ride’s resist then fly high

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Paul Callus

Date: 7/25/2024 2:01:00 PM

I'm impressed by this Suzette Prime delivery, Kim; in fact I'd have expected it to 'succeed' more and 'fly even higher'. Congrats & regards // paul

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/26/2024 10:42:00 AM

Thank you for saying so, Paul! I really appreciate that! Hugs

Len Gasun

Date: 7/25/2024 9:22:00 AM

Excellent poem about success crafted creatively in a beautiful form. Congratulations also on your win my dear poet friend! Thank you so much for sharing. God bless you always and your writings. Hugs

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/25/2024 12:58:00 PM

Bless you and thank you, Len!

Unseeking Seeker

Date: 7/25/2024 7:06:00 AM

Oh wow! I just cannot write like this ~ ‘seraphs linger in ride’s resist then fly high’. Warmest congratulations on your win, Kim

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/25/2024 12:55:00 PM

I appreciate you, my friend!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/25/2024 6:15:00 AM

Very nice winner. Way to go. Congratulations on your win. Sara K

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/25/2024 6:25:00 AM

Thank you, Sara!

Beata Agustin

Date: 7/24/2024 9:56:00 PM

Wow! Congratulations! Thanks for sharing this muse of yours... so wisdom-filled. God bless you.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/25/2024 6:25:00 AM

Thank you, Beata!

Gershon Wolf

Date: 7/16/2024 7:07:00 PM

I think you nailed 'Success' with a bullseye here, Kim. (I can say 'bullseye,' without political content, right?). ~ Independent of the Gathering Political Storm, gw

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/17/2024 5:43:00 AM

Because you are mature enough to realize as a poet and citizen that there are metaphors and there are threats. Thank you, my friend!

Paige Hind

Date: 7/16/2024 9:59:00 AM

Such an unique perspective- "in a bow" "wind up" beautiful writing

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/16/2024 10:38:00 AM

Thank you, Paige!