Succesive Septimal-The Circus Is Fun

Need to laugh?
Watch a clown's
       face!


Elephants's
strategy...
       dust!
 
              
Come out now,
slim jugglers...
        fun!


Trapezes swing...
couple making
        stunts!


Baby's eyes
look too scared...
         lion!
         

Small monkeys
jump and play...
         cheer!


Fast stallions
excite crowd...
          glee!


All come out
to thank them...
          glad!


Copyright 2009 by Andrew Crisci
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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June 25, 2009 at 11:58 AM
Creative series here. You took the form to a whole new level. Congratulations on being one of the winners in Brian's contest. Enjoy your honor. Keep up the good writing. Karen
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June 25, 2009 at 8:58 AM
Congrats on your success in my contest Andrew.Rgds Brian
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June 21, 2009 at 11:26 AM
Thanx Brilliant dude!A Terrif Write=) I Love the Imagery.Take Me to the circus Of Maaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaagic*.* And the emotions at the end of the stanza is smart-->Gone 2 my favs=p
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June 19, 2009 at 7:24 AM
Thank you for supporting my contest Andrew.Rgds Brian
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