Succeed

Succeed Eyes shifty from worry A gun awaits its release Step up to the line Get, Set and Go Don't fail Mind in order, hair askew Pens at the ready Make every second count You may now begin writing Don't fail A cigarette to the lips Six strings standing by Prepare your mind Step up to the mike Don't fail Braided tie, polished shoes Smart as your paper says Smile, nod, impress Can you start this Monday? Don't fail White altar, whiter flowers Fair lady on your arm Answer the questions You may now kiss the bride Don't fail A pigeon carries the message The chitter chatter, a mere murmur Hurry; hold; cry. Be brave Take care of your mother for me Don't fail A pretty girl in her prom dress Walking down the stairs Hold back those tears Dont wait up, Dad Don't fail Held prisoner, in a fortress Of a pillow-wielding prince Feel young again Come on, grandpa Don't fail Buzzing sounds; Heavy breathing Surroundings darken Smile. We're losing him Didn't fail ___________________________________ 30th Nov, 2015
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Agustin Avatar
September 1, 2024 at 5:14 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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February 21, 2016 at 1:48 PM
Prateek, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA
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December 25, 2015 at 3:46 PM
PRATEEK, thank you for sharing your poem *** Merry Christmas and Happy New Year! SKAT
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