Subway Salsa

A subway musician with salsa-like beat
In the sea of commuters, all surging,
Made some do a double-take at such a treat,
While out of the crowd was emerging…

A couple who dropped both their bags and their coats
To grasp shoulders and waists to start dancing.
They swiveled their hips as if sowing their oats
In a ballroom, their minds on romancing.

We stood on the platform, admired their moves
And thought, what a fabulous city,
Where people are able to practice their grooves
And where beauty eclipses the gritty.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Dietrich Avatar
October 27, 2016 at 8:57 PM
What a wonderful scene this must have been. OH, I miss this kind of thing. I saw it in SF when I lived out west. Not much of that here in Utah!! You are lucky to be in the Apple
Callus Avatar
October 27, 2016 at 9:15 AM
A delightful poem, Ilene! It would have been great to watch this show for free. All cities have their pros and cons; this spontaneous salsa dance is one of the positive ones. ~ Regards // paul
Flats Avatar
October 27, 2016 at 7:33 AM
I always wondered how wild oats were sown;-) Love your cityscape poems! Cheers! ~ john
Cochrane Avatar
October 26, 2016 at 11:54 PM
Fabulous, poetic scene!
Manassian Avatar
October 26, 2016 at 11:52 PM
LOVED this! I'd have loved to see those two dancing like that. How sensually sweet. Great write, my dear. XO
Turner Avatar
October 26, 2016 at 9:19 PM
Mrs Ilene, I'll bet if you look hard enough, one can see just about anything in NYC. I was once waiting to cross the GW bridge and watched 3 boys totally strip a stranded car in less than 5 minutes. Nothing left but the frame. Love the poem , as per usual. Your poems are always a delight.
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