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Suburban Decay

SUBURBAN DECAY. First glance, On a Dullton day, Golden years, First glance, eyes meet to dance. Both so old, Winter's fling on summer's daze, Languid heat, even his dog trod slow, shops half closed, wishing weeds a'blow, Suburban decay, Going nowhere much today, Rotted pavement, Greet and meet, Their last romance, Beyond first glance, withering blasts from adult kin, deleted to trash, Golden oldies, family misfits, thought so mouldy, No trouble today, Going nowhere much today, dawdling along, in the Slowton, Suburban decay.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 5/27/2015 6:17:00 PM
Julie, Enjoyed reading one of your latest poems, Hugs SKAT"
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Julie Grenness
Date: 5/27/2015 9:21:00 PM
Dear Skat, Greetings from Julie, thank you for kind feedback. I enjoy your poetry as well. This verse is like an ending that is a beginning, in a suburb like a small town. Bit run down. Have a lovely weekend. Regards from Julie.

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