Subtle hints and lies

How can I, make you move
When I can't find words to describe 
how I feel inside, so I cry.

I close my eyes sometimes.
To pacify the time, this fragile
thing called life.

we all have stars in our eyes
some have dreams that died
it shapes the wake of our life's
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Rodrigues Avatar
May 24, 2025 at 7:16 AM
Great emotion! Nicely said, Joseph
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