Subtle Airs

whispering of winds
sibilant, susurrations
inspiring insights

braggart's boring boasts
haughty, howlingly hollow
a wisp and a whiff

tintinnabulum
continuously caressed
potent priapic

wet and wheezy whine
old nick now is not so nice
whispering wraiths wait
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Dietrich Avatar
April 24, 2016 at 12:04 PM
wow, different TONES of wind in this little set. Lovely examples of alliteration too. and I see congratulations are in order as well!
Misra Avatar
April 25, 2016 at 12:34 AM
Thank you, Andrea, much appreciated!
Raven Avatar
April 1, 2016 at 9:38 AM
Hi Karam, Congratulations on your win in the contest....Vlad.
Misra Avatar
April 1, 2016 at 9:08 PM
Thank you, VR.
A. Sharma Avatar
April 1, 2016 at 1:29 AM
Congrats on ur superb win with this lovely write Karam..
Misra Avatar
April 1, 2016 at 4:52 AM
Thank you, Doc.
A   Avatar
March 31, 2016 at 11:50 PM
Karma, Congratulations on your Awesome Any Poem #38 win. Stop by my blog "GONE," drop by and leave a smile if you'd like. :) Always & Forever ~LINDA~
Misra Avatar
April 1, 2016 at 4:51 AM
Thank you for the honour, Linda. The last one could well be an entry for an anti-smoking campaign, I feel. What say you?
Prabhu Avatar
March 25, 2016 at 7:04 PM
KC.loved the alliteration
Misra Avatar
March 25, 2016 at 10:48 PM
Thanks for liking the haiku, Prabhu.
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