Subterranean

Down under
Asunder
There's worlds of wonder
Where etiquette 
Meets surrogate 
And the dress code's
Downright Confederate
Slithering among creepy crawlers
That descend from the
Heavenly puke-encrusted abyss above
Known as Hollywood Blvd 
I lower myself
Literally
Metaphorically
Into puddles of
Absentee-orchestrated nausea
I wear the badge
Singed onto calluses 
Coated with despair
Flavored with bacteria's black-dead cousins
There's more honor to own
When you don in early light 
Here ye, shall this journey commence 
This rue-faced, Taliban-tingling tale of whoa 
Give birth to the frenzy of the many
Here the ride shall be
Realized 
Commoditized 
Ostracized 
By mere plaintiffs 
Who sue themselves
Because the stakes are higher
And the risks cease to be true
Together we forge ahead
Teamwork knows no bounds or prescriptions 
When it's one-on-one-on-everyone 
Then the voice of gawd scats 
His incoherent mix of
Lazy blues and blatant misinformation
Notifying the hungry denizens
It's time to get out
It's time to get on
Its time to get off 
And off again
If necessary 
It's always necessary
And so we flee
For better lives
For better days 
For nothing happens until
You decide to rise above 
And get jiggy with the sun.

(3/5/15)

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 3/18/2015 10:30:00 AM
good ideas in this Suburban welcome to soup, ty for visiting my page hugs
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Date: 3/18/2015 10:36:00 AM
Thx Shadow, it's amazing what thoughts come to mind going in/out of the subway in Hollywood...Lovin' the Soup!
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