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Substantial

An indispensable moment, Draped in poise, Cradled me In its enormous influence, And waited to see If I would earn excellence. In the midnight twilight, Where fluidness meets The gravity of all we've known, I felt a conversion From sanctimony To humility. Perched high above Stinging words And glittering ego, Stood an unadorned reminder Of simple greatness As formed by the original architect. Oh, deliberate sphere, Help me to emerge From this wretched silhouette So I may become Something more Substantial.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2005




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